Tuesday, November 10, 2009

A Place I’ve Traveled to (Las Vegas)

A Place I’ve Traveled to (Las Vegas)

I traveled to Las Vegas with a friend this past April, the day after my 28th birthday. I had always wanted to go, as I’ve watched one too many gangster movies, and thought Vegas would be like something out of an Ocean’s eleven movie.
I saved for a long time, so that I could stay at a nicer room at Planet Hollywood, which at the time, was a newer hotel/Casino, right in the center of the strip.
I ended up having a really good time, but nothing like you’d think. I didn’t do anything I couldn’t tell my grandmother about (sadly) and I didn’t go to one night club, or win a lot of money.
What I did do in Vegas was visit Madam Tussad’s Wax Museum, ride a gondola, see a male stripper review, and visit the Eiffel Tower, I also visited over a dozen casino’s on the strip, all of which were beautiful.
I would love to go again, but maybe for a bachelorette party or, with more people, also it would have been nicer to have a little more money to stretch out. As it was I spent 1,500 hundred on the whole thing, which included airfare and 5 nights in the hotel, which is very very reasonable.

7 comments:

  1. Sounds like a good time in Vegas! I'll admit I've always wanted to go and in my mind I have made it out to be like Ocean's 11 or Fear and Loathing. My parents went a few years ago and they seemed to have a good time. I hope you get to go back and get a little crazy!

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  2. That's to bad you didn't do anything crazy! You did a nice job describing on what you thought it was going to be like in Vegas.

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  3. Yes, I have been to Las Vegas as well. My husband and I stopped at some casinos on our way to the Grand Canyon. We spent $10 on gambling and then bitterly left (we hate losing money on anything). But I'm still glad we went, and I'm very glad you got to go to your dream vacation!

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  4. Grade: 5/5
    • Should be Ocean's Eleven
    • Casino doesn't need to be capitalized as it's not a proper name.
    • Don't need comma after at the time
    • Don't need comma after long time
    • Nightclub is one word not two
    • Casinos is plural not possessive and doesn't need the 's
    • Should be a period after Eiffel Tower.
    • Should be five
    • Should be $1,500
    • Run-on sentence: I would love to go again, but maybe for a bachelorette party or, with more people, also it would have been nicer to have a little more money to stretch out.
    • Don't need comma after or

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  5. Sounds fun! I have a really good friend who lives right outside Vegas, but she hardly ever goes in and isn't a fan of gambling or anything. I think a lot of people hype it up for more than it is. My grandparents go to Vegas every year and just this year bought a winter home down there, they love it! But they're not crazy when they gamble.

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  6. Vegas is a great time. For the past few times that I've went, I didn't do any gambling. I instead went to the clubs and during the day drove around to the Grand Canyon and other places.

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  7. Those were some awesome sites you went to see. How were the male strippers? I have never seen them. I was going to go to Vegas in April too because my birthday it also during that month. My husband's cousin and newlywed husband just went there for their honeymoon!
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